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Baby Blue

Leo!! My fav.

I would go over him in black pen but i can't find any.

Yes - he has no neck

Yes - he has no shell

Yes - he has no mask tails

Yes - he has heterochromia eyes

(In my au, Donnie also has heterochromia eyes, just the other way round)

Usagi!

This is just a visualisation for how I percieve him.

Btw where did idea to put red eyeliner on Usagi come from, bc it is quite common but in the actual series, he doesn't wear any?

Bone-man will be next btw.

Read it. Its amazing!

PART 10 - Be Back Soon AU

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FUCK YEEAAAH i finally got to chap 10 jeez.

I love procreate iswg. They have an entire set of just light brushes. Makes my life easier.

Also I love insulting the Kraang. There is so many things to say.

Enjoy!

Hoodies

Figured I'd post something fun for a "first post" so here's some turtles for you all:D quite happy with this piece as well😊

Plus I'm thinking about maybe just making this like an everything account. Turtle content obviously, but maybe some thoughts, drawings, doodles as well? Idk... we'll see😁

「 Tears like Rain 」 I finally finished! Inspired by the latest fight

Donnie has been waiting a while to see these eyes open, sadly his body thinks he needs sleep more.

It’s 12am s d it hard to keep my eyes open

How to make your writing sound less stiff

Just a few suggestions. You shouldn’t have to compromise your writing style and voice with any of these, and some situations and scenes might demand some stiff or jerky writing to better convey emotion and immersion. I am not the first to come up with these, just circulating them again.

1. Vary sentence structure.

This is an example paragraph. You might see this generated from AI. I can’t help but read this in a robotic voice. It’s very flat and undynamic. No matter what the words are, it will be boring. It’s boring because you don’t think in stiff sentences. Comedians don’t tell jokes in stiff sentences. We don’t tell campfire stories in stiff sentences. These often lack flow between points, too.

So funnily enough, I had to sit through 87k words of a “romance” written just like this. It was stiff, janky, and very unpoetic. Which is fine, the author didn’t tell me it was erotica. It just felt like an old lady narrator, like Old Rose from Titanic telling the audience decades after the fact instead of living it right in the moment. It was in first person pov, too, which just made it worse. To be able to write something so explicit and yet so un-titillating was a talent. Like, beginner fanfic smut writers at least do it with enthusiasm.

2. Vary dialogue tag placement

You got three options, pre-, mid-, and post-tags.

Leader said, “this is a pre-dialogue tag.”

“This,” Lancer said, “is a mid-dialogue tag.”

“This is a post-dialogue tag,” Heart said.

Pre and Post have about the same effect but mid-tags do a lot of heavy lifting.

They help break up long paragraphs of dialogue that are jank to look at

They give you pauses for ~dramatic effect~

They prompt you to provide some other action, introspection, or scene descriptor with the tag. *don't forget that if you're continuing the sentence as if the tag wasn't there, not to capitalize the first word after the tag. Capitalize if the tag breaks up two complete sentences, not if it interrupts a single sentence.

It also looks better along the lefthand margin when you don’t start every paragraph with either the same character name, the same pronouns, or the same “ as it reads more natural and organic.

3. When the scene demands, get dynamic

General rule of thumb is that action scenes demand quick exchanges, short paragraphs, and very lean descriptors. Action scenes are where you put your juicy verbs to use and cut as many adverbs as you can. But regardless of if you’re in first person, second person, or third person limited, you can let the mood of the narrator bleed out into their narration.

Like, in horror, you can use a lot of onomatopoeia.

Drip Drip Drip

Or let the narration become jerky and unfocused and less strict in punctuation and maybe even a couple run-on sentences as your character struggles to think or catch their breath and is getting very overwhelmed.

You can toss out some grammar rules, too and get more poetic.

Warm breath tickles the back of her neck. It rattles, a quiet, soggy, rasp. She shivers. If she doesn’t look, it’s not there. If she doesn’t look, it’s not there. Sweat beads at her temple. Her heart thunders in her chest. Ba-bump-ba-bump-ba-bump-ba- It moves on, leaving a void of cold behind. She uncurls her fists, fingers achy and palms stinging from her nails. It’s gone.

4. Remember to balance dialogue, monologue, introspection, action, and descriptors.

The amount of times I have been faced with giant blocks of dialogue with zero tags, zero emotions, just speech on a page like they’re notecards to be read on a stage is higher than I expected. Don’t forget that though you may know exactly how your dialogue sounds in your head, your readers don’t. They need dialogue tags to pick up on things like tone, specifically for sarcasm and sincerity, whether a character is joking or hurt or happy.

If you’ve written a block of text (usually exposition or backstory stuff) that’s longer than 50 words, figure out a way to trim it. No matter what, break it up into multiple sections and fill in those breaks with important narrative that reflects the narrator’s feelings on what they’re saying and whoever they’re speaking to’s reaction to the words being said. Otherwise it’s meaningless.

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Hope this helps anyone struggling! Now get writing.

ok but i did a rlly cute header for my intro post, look at themmm

Never Give Up. There is still time to save Rise.

We still have a ninja's Greatest Weapon:

Hope

I'm not mad that Mutant Mayhem exists, I'm mad that Nickelodeon seems to be glad to move on to a new iteration so quickly when they didn't even let Rise finish, and apparently MM has better action figures before it's even out than Rise got during its entire run.

Why didn't Rise get good toys? The actions figures it has look garbo.