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11 months ago

Prompt:

Jason hacks into Bruce’s comm when it becomes apparent that he cannot be trusted to keep his birds safe.

Whenever either Tim or Dick are in danger and Batman is nowhere in sight, Jason switches on his side of the audio line to provide mildly ominous commentary.

Bruce is sure his dead kid is haunting him.

11 months ago

Red Hood au where Jason has amnesia (thanks to being beaten upside the head before being blown up), but still wants to do his insane revenge plan against Batman. He has no idea why he's beefing with this random ass dude. He just knows he has unresolved daddy issues and pointed it at the most dramatic looking bitch on the East Coast

10 months ago

Can you please reblog if your blog is a safe place for lesbian, gay, bisexual, transgender, asexual, aromantic, pansexual, non binary, demisexual or any other kind of queer or questioning people? Because mine is.

11 months ago
A digital DC fancomic page with two panels. 
The first panel is of Jon Kent looking up at the viewer, with wide eyes and a missing front tooth. Dialogue reads: 
Jon: "Mister Wayne can I look inside your head please?"
Offscreen: "What?" "Oh my God"
Jon: My dad says you have brain damage from getting hit in the head every night and that's why Damian is allowed to fight bad guys on school days I just want to see."
The second panel is of Bruce Wayne looking downwards with a dour expression. Dick Grayson is in the background, with a gleeful expression and a laser flare over one eye. Dialogue reads: 
Bruce: "Hm."
Dick: "Holy shit."

babysitting your work friend's kid and he asks to look at your patchwork quilt of a skull. wyd. inspired by Super Sons #6!

A crop of a comic panel from Super Sons #6, with Lois Lane, Clark Kent, and Jon Kent at a dinner table. Dialogue reads:
Clark: "Remember, back by 10 P.M. on the dot." 
Jon: "Aww, c'mon, it's Friday. Damian's dad lets him stay out all night!"
A crop of a comic panel from Super Sons #6, with Lois Lane, Clark Kent, and Jon Kent at a dinner table. Dialogue reads:
Clark: "Damian's dad dresses like a bat and gets hit in the head 28 times every night. So maybe not the best argument."
1 year ago

"I cant draw" then do it bad who gives a fuck.....

10 months ago

do you know how fucking mad i am at the fact that the webcomic gave us lloyd giving javier his own mana in an attempt to save his life and javier overcoming literal dimensional differences in order to be able to accept it into his body effectively foreshadowing how far he's willing to go just to be able to protect lloyd,,,, but they did it all with a fucking 'haha lloyd is ugly' joke. do you.

this could've been one of the best scenes in the entire thing. it could've been such a pivotal point for their character development. it could've been one of the most earnest moments in the story. but it's made into a joke because they just need to draw the ugliest faces possible to make a cheap joke that has been made a hundred times already. i'm not being funny i'm genuinely mad at the wasted potential lmao

the tone of the scene was changed from the webnovel so much it's almost unrecognizable. and not in a good way. like. why would you cheapen the emotional core of your own story like this. do you trust your own plot and characters so little to keep your readers engaged with the story that you feel the need to make everything in a joke. is that it. was the original story not funny enough to keep your attention so you think no one will care if you turn what's meant to be an earnest and heartwarming scene into a joke you've made hundreds of time before.

i'm not. mad. about the changes themselves (mostly). like i said this particular scene had so much potential to compliment the original story and foreshadow the ending that i'm actually upset that the tone and art made it so i can't in good faith say i like it.

they just. shot themselves in the foot by trying to make the scene funny. all the tension and emotional built up is wasted when the webcomic makes fun of itself. it cannot take itself seriously so i can't either.

like. it was going so well. i loved the built up with the scene where they talk about javier's parents and you see that they're still emotionally guarded with each other, they don't quite feel close enough to the other to call themselves friends even when we know that they care deeply for each other. i liked that they changed it so lloyd had the opportunity to save javier the way he wasn't able to in the novel. i even liked the development with lloyd's mana being so different from javier's that he struggles with accepting it, cause it was a chance to call forward to a very important event in the future.

the scene where they're reaching for each other as they realize that yes, they're friends and god help them they will save their friend no matter what?? gorgeous i loved it so much, it wasn't 'We'll be together forever, just like we've always been. Casually. As natural as breathing air.' yeah but it was perfectly okay on it's own too.

and then they do this.

Do You Know How Fucking Mad I Am At The Fact That The Webcomic Gave Us Lloyd Giving Javier His Own Mana
Do You Know How Fucking Mad I Am At The Fact That The Webcomic Gave Us Lloyd Giving Javier His Own Mana
Do You Know How Fucking Mad I Am At The Fact That The Webcomic Gave Us Lloyd Giving Javier His Own Mana
Do You Know How Fucking Mad I Am At The Fact That The Webcomic Gave Us Lloyd Giving Javier His Own Mana
Do You Know How Fucking Mad I Am At The Fact That The Webcomic Gave Us Lloyd Giving Javier His Own Mana
Do You Know How Fucking Mad I Am At The Fact That The Webcomic Gave Us Lloyd Giving Javier His Own Mana
Do You Know How Fucking Mad I Am At The Fact That The Webcomic Gave Us Lloyd Giving Javier His Own Mana

like. what.

all that emotional built up, all that tension, all of it,,, for this?? this????

what's the point of making your audience feel emotionally engaged with the story if you're just gonna make the art equivalent of a fart noise. a well executed yet still completely out of place fart noise lmao

it doesn't feel funny, it just makes me feel like i wasted my time being emotionally invested in something that isn't interested in delivering. it's like watching someone setting up dominoes to topple them in a gorgeous pattern only for them to put on clown shoes and start kicking them all over the place without rhyme or reason. like yeah they're in their right but then what was the point of all that work in the first place.

and yeah maybe it's my fault for expecting something earnest and heartfelt from a webcomic that has shown multiples times that it's not interested on that but like. is it really too much to expect for an adaptation to, well, adapt the original source in a way that doesn't feel like it's making fun of it??

11 months ago
Bruce Has Never Woken Up So Fast In His Entire Life And He's Been Stabbed In His Sleep Before.
Bruce Has Never Woken Up So Fast In His Entire Life And He's Been Stabbed In His Sleep Before.
Bruce Has Never Woken Up So Fast In His Entire Life And He's Been Stabbed In His Sleep Before.

Bruce has never woken up so fast in his entire life and he's been stabbed in his sleep before.

Commission Info / Kofi

11 months ago

The batkids getting in trouble with the JL somehow when undercover or when using aliases and instead of... you know... the aliases... they give their siblings first names. Batman has gotten multiple calls from the JL where they'd be like

Green Lantern: Uh Bats we've got a 'Jason' in custody here he's asking for you.

Batman, panicking bc wtf did Jay do this time:

Tim: Hi!

Batman: You're not Jason.

Tim, dead serious: I don't know what you're talking about.

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