LITERALLY BEGGING π I NEED MORE OBITO ANGST. AN UNREQUITED LOVE AND ALL THAT SHIT.
Dear Anime fic writers, especially those who write for Naruto characters, could you make more Obito, Genma, Shikamaru angst stories? Pleaaassseeee...
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Jack, giving Mc a pep talk: Things are going to be difficult but you-
Ace: are going to be difficulter.
Epel, hyping them up: That's the spirit! Be a problem to your problem! Mark your territory!
Every writer inevitably gets to that scene that just doesn't want to work. It doesn't flow, no matter how hard you try. Well, here are some things to try to get out of that rut:
I know this doesn't sound like it'll make much of a difference, but trust me when I say it does.
Every single time I've tried this, it worked and the scene flowed magically.
If your book has multiple POV characters, it might be a good idea to switch the scene to another character's perspective.
9/10 times, this will make the scene flow better.
Oftentimes, a scene just doesn't work because you're not starting in the right place.
Perhaps you're starting too late and giving too little context. Perhaps some description or character introspection is needed before you dive in.
Alternatively, you may be taking too long to get to the actual point of the scene. Would it help to dive straight into the action without much ado?
If your scene involves dialogue, it can help immensely to write only the spoken words the first time round.
It's even better if you highlight different characters' speech in different colors.
Then, later on, you can go back and fill in the dialogue tags, description etc.
If nothing works, it's time to move on.
Rather than perpetually getting stuck on that one scene, use a placeholder. Something like: [they escape somehow] or [big emotional talk].
And then continue with the draft.
This'll help you keep momentum and, maybe, make the scene easier to write later on once you have a better grasp on the plot and characters.
Trust me, I do this all the time.
It can take some practice to get past your Type A brain screaming at you, but it's worth it.
So, those are some things to try when a scene is being difficult. I hope that these tips help :)
I know it probably was Kishimoto being misogynistic, but Sakura's obsession with herself as a sexual object in the first chapters was disturbing and I wish it was explored more. Like, she's only twelve and already skipping meals to lose weight and measuring her worth as Sasuke's potential girlfriend based on how big her tits and ass are. That's not normal. Ino also tried to seduce Neji to protect her and her teammates' lives at some point, I think. What does that say about their society? If this was another series, their behaviors could be explained as personal idiosyncracies, but given some of the roles that kunoichi played historically, seducing men to spy or assassinate them, it would make sense for them to be obsessed with their physical appearance. Their livehoods depend on men finding them desirable.
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Aurora Borealis : morning light from the north
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Crepusculum : twilight
Umbra : darkness
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A married woman saves an uninteresting Japanese high schooler from a truck crash, but dies in the process. She wakes up in a world of adventure and harems, clearly made for the boy.
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