Look. I Don’t Think My Stretch Marks Are Beautiful. I Don’t Think They’re Tiger Stripes Or Natural

look. i don’t think my stretch marks are beautiful. i don’t think they’re tiger stripes or natural tattooos. i don’t think my acne is beautiful. i don’t think the bags under my eyes are beautiful. i just think they’re human. and i don’t think i have to be beautiful all of the time in order to be accepted and loved and sucessful. i don’t think every small detail of my outer appearence needs to be translated into prettiness.

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4 years ago

Testing my first graphic tablet.

Testing My First Graphic Tablet.
4 years ago

Straight, Bi, Pan, Queer, Questioning, Pan

hey if ur lgbtq rb this with all ur past labels nd the one u use now

i’ll go first straight, bi, pan, demi, then lesbian

4 years ago

when will people use the anon function to send passionate, homosexual anonymous love letters

4 years ago

Reblog if Black Lives Matter to you

Where are those woke white people at!?

3 years ago

Writing fight scenes

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1. Pacing

A fight scene should be fast-paced and intense. Unless it's a final battle with numerous parties, a fight scene that's too long tends to take away suspense. To speed up your pacing, use active voice to describe movement and don't overdescribe your characters' thoughts. Excessive inner monologue will be unrealistic, as people usually have no room to think during intense combats.

2. Character mannerisms

Here's a point that people often overlook, but is actually super important. Through fight scenes, you should be able to reveal your characters' contrasting mannerisms and personality. A cunning character would play dirty - fighting less and making use of their opponent's weakness more. A violent character would aim to kill. A softer one would only target to disarm their enemies, using weakened attacks. A short-minded character would only rely on force and attack without thinking. This will help readers understand your characters more and decide who to root for.

3. Making use of surroundings

Not only the characters, you also need to consider the setting of your fight scene and use it to your advantage. Is it suitable for fighting, or are there dangerous slopes that make it risky? Are there scattered items that can help your characters fight (e.g. nails, shards of glass, ropes, wooden boards, or cutlery)? Is it a public place where people can easily spot the fight and call the authorities, or is it a private spot where they can fight to the death?

4. Description

The main things that you need to describe in a fight scene are :

• Characters involved in the fight

• How they initiate and dodge attacks

• Fighting styles and any weapons used

• The injuries caused

Be careful to not drag out the description for too long, because it slows down the pace.

5. Raise the stakes

By raising the stakes of the fight, your readers will be more invested in it. Just when they think it's over, introduce another worse conflict that will keep the scene going. Think of your characters' goals and motivations as well. Maybe if the MC didn't win, the world would end! Or maybe, one person in the fight is going all-out, while the other is going easy because they used to be close :"D

6. Injuries

Fights are bound to be dirty and resulting in injuries, so don't let your character walk away unscathed - show the effect of their injuries. For example, someone who had been punched in the jaw has a good chance of passing out, and someone who had been stabbed won't just remove the knife and walk away without any problem. To portray realistic injuries, research well. I have two posts about writing realistic pain and injuries back in my pink theme, check them out if you need any reference!

7. Drive the plot forward

You don't write fight scenes only to make your characters look cool - every fight needs to have a purpose and drive the plot forward. Maybe they have to fight to improve their fighting skills or escape from somewhere alive. Maybe they need to defeat the enemy in order to obtain an object or retrieve someone who had been kidnapped. The point is, every single fight scene should bring the characters one step closer (or further :D) to the climax.

8. Words to use

• Hand to hand combat :

Crush, smash, lunge, beat, punch, leap, slap, scratch, batter, pummel, whack, slam, dodge, clobber, box, shove, bruise, knock, flick, push, choke, charge, impact

• With weapon :

Swing, slice, brandish, stab, shoot, whip, parry, cut, bump, poke, drive, shock, strap, pelt, plunge, impale, lash, bleed, sting, penetrate

4 years ago
Everyone, Please, I Need Your Help. @blaster-lunaz Is Going Through Hard Shit And… I Decided With Their
Everyone, Please, I Need Your Help. @blaster-lunaz Is Going Through Hard Shit And… I Decided With Their

Everyone, please, I need your help. @blaster-lunaz is going through hard shit and… I decided with their permission to make this post. One note = one day they’ll live, please, like and reblog if you can, Luna is a wonderful person who deserves to have a better life and that will come eventually, I just want them yo stay with us.

Please boost, please everyone here, comment, like reblog, anything. Please.

@lunityvirus @crisisbruno @starplatinum-aesthetic @just–quinn @thehugwizard @hugging-jjba-characters @mistaeq @emeraldbutterflies @trying-my-bardest @blepshmep @canonicaldraconical @0of64 @princemattress @dragonprincess18 @memory-mortis @hello-the-end-is-near @its-that-guy-again @wolfempress-14 @ anyone, anyone, please I’m shaking I don’t want to lose them I just want them to be happy again, please everyone boost this

4 years ago

petition to rename the usa ‘south canada’

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phiikichi - woke up today and chose bamboozlery
woke up today and chose bamboozlery

18, she/her, cisgender, demi-aroace bi/pan/lesbian/queer/labels are hard ok;;; Come watch me sell my soul to a new work of fiction every week

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