Not My Black Marker Giving Out On Me On The Second Day Of Inktober 😄

Not my black marker giving out on me on the second day of Inktober 😄

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4 years ago

actually important

Actually Important
Actually Important
Actually Important
Actually Important
Actually Important

filipino people please stay safe. if you see this post, PLEASE reblog it, unless you live in the philippines because it might count as terrorism. if you dont reblog anything else from me ever reblog this. people lives are in danger and ive only seen one post mention it. (im not reblogging that post cuz tumblr deleted it)

if anyone has more up to date or specific information please message me and i will update this post.

4 years ago

All you’ve ever wanted was to be feared and rule the world but every villainous act you commit backfires. Steal candy from a baby? Poisoned candy, baby saved. Steal the baby? Abusive parents. Threw a woman off a building? Push she needed to unlock her powers of flight, she’s now your sidekick.

4 years ago
♥️♠️ Welcome, TRICKSTER ♣️♦️ Game On, DEALER
♥️♠️ Welcome, TRICKSTER ♣️♦️ Game On, DEALER

♥️♠️ Welcome, TRICKSTER ♣️♦️ Game on, DEALER

4 years ago
Inktober, Day 1

Inktober, day 1

I.R. with the Venom Sword

4 years ago

MY GAWD

WORLD DESTROYEEEEEER BOOM BOOM
WORLD DESTROYEEEEEER BOOM BOOM

WORLD DESTROYEEEEEER BOOM BOOM

3 years ago

Writing fight scenes

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1. Pacing

A fight scene should be fast-paced and intense. Unless it's a final battle with numerous parties, a fight scene that's too long tends to take away suspense. To speed up your pacing, use active voice to describe movement and don't overdescribe your characters' thoughts. Excessive inner monologue will be unrealistic, as people usually have no room to think during intense combats.

2. Character mannerisms

Here's a point that people often overlook, but is actually super important. Through fight scenes, you should be able to reveal your characters' contrasting mannerisms and personality. A cunning character would play dirty - fighting less and making use of their opponent's weakness more. A violent character would aim to kill. A softer one would only target to disarm their enemies, using weakened attacks. A short-minded character would only rely on force and attack without thinking. This will help readers understand your characters more and decide who to root for.

3. Making use of surroundings

Not only the characters, you also need to consider the setting of your fight scene and use it to your advantage. Is it suitable for fighting, or are there dangerous slopes that make it risky? Are there scattered items that can help your characters fight (e.g. nails, shards of glass, ropes, wooden boards, or cutlery)? Is it a public place where people can easily spot the fight and call the authorities, or is it a private spot where they can fight to the death?

4. Description

The main things that you need to describe in a fight scene are :

• Characters involved in the fight

• How they initiate and dodge attacks

• Fighting styles and any weapons used

• The injuries caused

Be careful to not drag out the description for too long, because it slows down the pace.

5. Raise the stakes

By raising the stakes of the fight, your readers will be more invested in it. Just when they think it's over, introduce another worse conflict that will keep the scene going. Think of your characters' goals and motivations as well. Maybe if the MC didn't win, the world would end! Or maybe, one person in the fight is going all-out, while the other is going easy because they used to be close :"D

6. Injuries

Fights are bound to be dirty and resulting in injuries, so don't let your character walk away unscathed - show the effect of their injuries. For example, someone who had been punched in the jaw has a good chance of passing out, and someone who had been stabbed won't just remove the knife and walk away without any problem. To portray realistic injuries, research well. I have two posts about writing realistic pain and injuries back in my pink theme, check them out if you need any reference!

7. Drive the plot forward

You don't write fight scenes only to make your characters look cool - every fight needs to have a purpose and drive the plot forward. Maybe they have to fight to improve their fighting skills or escape from somewhere alive. Maybe they need to defeat the enemy in order to obtain an object or retrieve someone who had been kidnapped. The point is, every single fight scene should bring the characters one step closer (or further :D) to the climax.

8. Words to use

• Hand to hand combat :

Crush, smash, lunge, beat, punch, leap, slap, scratch, batter, pummel, whack, slam, dodge, clobber, box, shove, bruise, knock, flick, push, choke, charge, impact

• With weapon :

Swing, slice, brandish, stab, shoot, whip, parry, cut, bump, poke, drive, shock, strap, pelt, plunge, impale, lash, bleed, sting, penetrate

4 years ago

Woah-

I got tagged-

Okay uh then

1) Kokichi mah boi :')

2) Ibblescribble's art

3) Professor Layton OST

4) A new chatroom with 707 on MysMess :3

5) When people DON'T ask me to draw them when they realize I'm the art kid of the bunch

Pass the happy 🌻 when you receive this, list with 5 things that make you happy and send this to 10 of the last people in your notifications! <3

All my friends and followers on here because you guys are just the best I love you all.

Writing for you all, especially when you guys send all your lovely prompts.

My husband Shinjiro Aragaki I need more of him in my life.

My puppy Kaylee, everytime I come home she acts like I’ve been gone for years!

Playing video games because I get to go to another world.

I tag: @tarahhornee @funamusea-imagines @iamalivingparody @rumbllefish @z-iridest @pa3art-gb @agirlinsearchof


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