Well......turns out I’m an Indifferent Thot
Cursed Creature here
Good morning to Black People and Black People only. Happy Black History Month. Reblog to dap each other up.
Obscura has entered into my top rated games that have caughted my game this year. And as someone who is also in the Touchstarved fandom, I DEFINITELY recommend others to check it out. Keir, Oleander’s, and Cirrus route both intrigue me and Francesco is such a wholesome (but naively dangerous) angel.
Here is my Vesper MC who I call ‘Lupine’
Happy Inktober! (Tried my best ^>^)
break up your paragraphs. big paragraphs are scary, your readers will get scared
fuuuuck epithets. “the other man got up” “the taller woman sat down” “the blonde walked away” nahhh. call them by their names or rework the sentence. you can do so much better than this (exception: if the reader doesn’t know the character(s) you’re referring to yet, it’s a-okay to refer to them by an identifying trait)
blunette is not a thing
new speaker, new paragraph. please.
“said” is such a great word. use it. make sweet love to it. but don’t kill it
use “said” more than you use synonyms for it. that way the use of synonyms gets more exciting. getting a sudden description of how a character is saying something (screaming, mumbling, sighing) is more interesting that way.
if your summary says “I suck at summaries” or “story better than summary” you’re turning off the reader, my dude. your summary is supposed to be your hook. you gotta own it, just like you’re gonna own the story they’re about to read
follow long sentences w short ones and short ones w long ones. same goes for paragraphs
your writing is always better than you think it is. you just think it’s bad because the story’s always gonna be predicable to the one who’s writing it
i love u guys keep on trucking
Pow pow
So here is the Last Legacy version of the Pokemon Au.For this one, I see the Starsworn being somewhat like Pokemon Rangers seeing how they both protect and help people and their world.
Alolan Marowak (Fire/Ghost) - Besides both having the same green flames, (and possibly height XD), this Marowak is referred as “conjurers of the dead”, with their spirt projecting and sixth sense.
Meowstic (Psychic)- The Stella vibes are strong with this one.
Cofagrigus (Ghost)- Felix occasionally visits a lot of crypts and masoleums, so it’s only natural he catches a ghost pokemon lurking around.
Decidueye (Grass/ Ghost)- So I’m in the same camp that think that Felix got his admiration of plants from Florian, so why not have a pokemon that mashes both his and his Dads interests.
Spiritomb (Ghost/Dark)- Felix has had many......”accidents “ in his life so coming a cross and eventually this spirit makes perfect sense.
Litwick (Ghost/Fire)- Reflects on how flustered and clumsy Felix can be.
Absol (Dark)- Part of this pick goes into spoiler territory for her Route, but it’s also due to its cat like appearance. Absol is also good natured and known to help those in need.
Samurott (Water)- Since Anisa is a knight , Samurott’s valiant and selfless nature fits well with her.
Aegislash (Steel/Ghost)- This mostly connects to her relic and what knight isn’t without her sword and sheild.
Togekiss (Fairy/Flying)- A pokemon relating to Anisa’s moral and gentle nature. This pokemon soars to a variety of different places, so this can connect her to awareness of outer realms.
Wingull (Water/Flying)- Another one relating to other realms.With having this pokemon around, it kinda examples where Anisa gets alot of foreign items and collection, as well as the sheer amount of junk she has in her apartment.
Kirlia (Psyhic)- I wanted to give her a pokemon to reflect her graceful and playful side.
Incineroar (Fire/Dark)- I mean come on! A hot tempered kitty with a burning fuse, how could he NOT have this pokemon.
Darmanitan (Fire)- Another big fiery muscle. Though I think this one can show more control when it goes into zen mode
Pignite (Fire/Fighting)- This little guy is a big eater as much as Sage is a bar hopping party animal. I can definitely see them running up each others tabs.
Zoura (Dark)- A mischievous little furball who finds trouble wherever they go. It’s a perfect match. Sage probably ran into him while he was on the street as a kid.
Scrafty (Dark/Fighting)- Fits his “Lone Wolf” persona and tendencies, as well as his impatient personality.
Obstagoon (Dark/Normal)- Sage would have probably got this wild pokemon after MC’s disappearance and when Astrea was taken over. He probably worked up some mutual agreement Obstagoon to wreck havoc while until he assists at killing Gramme.
Maaaan, I bet Yuu was there every moment this happened, did nothing and just stood back with a bucket of popcorn. 🍿🤣
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