I’m crying
the sexual tension between two racists on national television is really extreme in this white house today
Peter: Picks up hammer to nail painting to the wall
Thor:
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by satans_dolly_boy666
“So… Is it your hobby to do business with homeless people?”
Prompt #11: “Homeless Peter (finally) plus our billionaire who wants to give him a hand.”
YAASSSS I WROTE SOMETHING RELATED TO A HOMELESS PETER PARKER wiii !!! Am I welcome to the Homeless Peter Parker fan club now? no seriously why this is a thing in this fandom? (don´t answer it)
Words: 1074, Chapters: 1/1, Language: English
Series: Part 14 of Tony Stark & Peter Parker duo Prompts OR Spiderman stories and ocasionally the appearance of Tony and the avengers
Fandoms: Spider-Man (Tom Holland Movies), Spider-Man - All Media Types, Iron Man (Movies)
Rating: General Audiences
Warnings: Creator Chose Not To Use Archive Warnings
Categories: Other
Characters: Tony Stark, Peter Parker, Happy Hogan, Mary Parker, Richard Parker
Relationships: Peter Parker & Tony Stark, Happy Hogan & Peter Parker
Additional Tags: Homeless Peter Parker, Homelessness, Protective Tony Stark, Precious Peter Parker, Peter Parker is a Mess, Peter Parker Needs a Hug, POV Peter Parker, The parker luck :D
Okay fucking ow
thinking about how many air nomads that died refusing to leave their injured sky bisons and defending them to their last breath while trying not to harm fire nation soldiers that came their way ... i love causing my own sadness
by Iron_Daddy
Tony wakes up one morning to find nobody knows who Peter is, nobody remembers Spiderman, nobody recalls the vigilante who helped stop Thanos- Nobody recalls the energetic avenger-in-training at all, except Tony.
What the fuck is happening??
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AKA. Sony and Disney being assholes and taking Spiderman from his home: The MCU and me writing about everyone in MCU forgetting Spidey bc that’s our reality now.
Words: 1421, Chapters: 1/1, Language: English
Fandoms: Spider-Man - All Media Types, Spider-Man (Tom Holland Movies), Iron Man (Movies), The Avengers (Marvel Movies), The Avengers (Marvel) - All Media Types
Rating: Teen And Up Audiences
Warnings: No Archive Warnings Apply
Characters: Tony Stark, Peter Parker, Pepper Potts, Sam Wilson (Marvel), Clint Barton, May Parker (Spider-Man), Ben Parker, Friday (Marvel)
Relationships: Peter Parker & Tony Stark
Additional Tags: Hurt Tony Stark, Tony Stark Needs a Hug, Peter Parker Needs a Hug, Tony Stark Has Issues, Angst, Light Angst, Ambiguous/Open Ending, me trying to get my head around the fact spidey isnt in mcu anymore, Post-Avengers: Endgame (Movie), Tony Stark Lives, forgot how to tag tbh, Amnesia, but like everyone?, Time issues, probs stone shit, idek, never cleared up, #BoycottSony, #SaveSpiderman
Any tips on how to make readers root for a character that's not the narrator?
Well, why have you ever rooted for characters other than the narrator? What have you read or heard from other people that makes them root for a character? Oftentimes a good chunk of an answer just takes a bit of introspection or listening.
Typically, readers root for characters that they find to have at least one of the qualifications:
Useful: Contributes positively to the story, either by helping others or driving it themselves.
Sympathetic: The character is understandable as a well rounded person.
Funny: Is amusing to readers.
Relatable: Readers can see parts of themselves in the character. A Reminder About “Relatable” Characters (link embedded)
Admirable: Has generally good qualities, but does not have to be perfect. A realistic role model.
Interesting: The more they learn, the more people want to know more about them.
(This isn’t a rigid list, but the qualifications are generally positive or entertaining)
None of those qualifications are restricted to only show-able in a narrator in any way, however a good part of ‘rooting” for someone involves wanting them to achieve their goal. Not being the narrator, they’re likely not the protagonist and therefore the main plot may not be about their goal. You can address that in a few ways:
Subplots: Give the character and their goal a subplot, however remember that subplots have to be related to the main plot and can’t just be a character going off for unrelated reasons.
Aligned goals: By participating in the plot and alongside the protagonist, the character’s goals can be worked toward, though it’s not the same as the protag’s.
Same goal: They have the same goal as the protag. (When using this option, make sure to give that character unique motivation. Being too similar to a protagonist in motive can decreases reader interest.)
Side stories: The character is allowed to have their own adventures, you just shouldn’t be dedicating a lot of “screen time” to them if they aren’t directly plot involved.
In the most generic sense, you just want to write an interesting character. No, the reader is not going to be able to see their inner monologue, but they can’t see most of any book characters’ inner monologues and it’s rare for a reader to hate everyone but the narrator (unless they’re all poorly written or that’s the point).
You can still teach a reader about a character through: body language, description, dialogue, symbolism, actions, choices, etc.
Good luck with your character!
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I love this
I got pretty fed up with looking for words to replace said because they weren’t sorted in a way I could easily use/find them for the right time. So I did some myself.
IN RESPONSE TO Acknowledged Answered Protested
INPUT/JOIN CONVERSATION/ASK Added Implored Inquired Insisted Proposed Queried Questioned Recommended Testified
GUILTY/RELUCTANCE/SORRY Admitted Apologized Conceded Confessed Professed
FOR SOMEONE ELSE Advised Criticized Suggested
JUST CHECKING Affirmed Agreed Alleged Confirmed
LOUD Announced Chanted Crowed
LEWD/CUTE/SECRET SPY FEEL Appealed Disclosed Moaned
ANGRY FUCK OFF MATE WANNA FIGHT Argued Barked Challenged Cursed Fumed Growled Hissed Roared Swore
SMARTASS Articulated Asserted Assured Avowed Claimed Commanded Cross-examined Demanded Digressed Directed Foretold Instructed Interrupted Predicted Proclaimed Quoted Theorized
ASSHOLE Bellowed Boasted Bragged
NERVOUS TRAINWRECK Babbled Bawled Mumbled Sputtered Stammered Stuttered
SUAVE MOTHERFUCKER Bargained Divulged Disclosed Exhorted
FIRST OFF Began
LASTLY Concluded Concurred
WEAK PUSY Begged Blurted Complained Cried Faltered Fretted
HAPPY/LOL Cajoled Exclaimed Gushed Jested Joked Laughed
WEIRDLY HAPPY/EXCITED Extolled Jabbered Raved
BRUH, CHILL Cautioned Warned
ACTUALLY, YOU’RE WRONG Chided Contended Corrected Countered Debated Elaborated Objected Ranted Retorted
CHILL SAVAGE Commented Continued Observed Surmised
LISTEN BUDDY Enunciated Explained Elaborated Hinted Implied Lectured Reiterated Recited Reminded Stressed
BRUH I NEED U AND U NEED ME Confided Offered Urged
FINE Consented Decided
TOO EMO FULL OF EMOTIONS Croaked Lamented Pledged Sobbed Sympathized Wailed Whimpered
JUST SAYING Declared Decreed Mentioned Noted Pointed out Postulated Speculated Stated Told Vouched
WASN’T ME Denied Lied
EVIL SMARTASS Dictated Equivocated Ordered Reprimanded Threatened
BORED Droned Sighed
SHHHH IT’S QUIET TIME Echoed Mumbled Murmured Muttered Uttered Whispered
DRAMA QUEEN Exaggerated Panted Pleaded Prayed Preached
OH SHIT Gasped Marveled Screamed Screeched Shouted Shrieked Yelped Yelled
ANNOYED Grumbled Grunted Jeered Quipped Scolded Snapped Snarled Sneered
ANNOYING Nagged
I DON’T REALLY CARE BUT WHATEVER Guessed Ventured
I’M DRUNK OR JUST BEING WEIRDLY EXPRESSIVE FOR A POINT/SARCASM Hooted Howled Yowled
I WONDER Pondered Voiced Wondered
OH, YEAH, WHOOPS Recalled Recited Remembered
SURPRISE BITCH Revealed
IT SEEMS FAKE BUT OKAY/HA ACTUALLY FUNNY BUT I DON’T WANT TO LAUGH OUT LOUD Scoffed Snickered Snorted
BITCHY Tattled Taunted Teased