Why Haven’t You Killed Your Character Yet?

Why Haven’t You Killed Your Character yet?

A couple of years ago, I wrote a post during NaNoWriMo titled “Make Your Deaths Mean Something.” It’s the most popular post I’ve ever written (on this blog or any of my other blogs) and I was looking at it the other day and decided it was time to look at the other side of the discussion. You need to get your act together and kill your character.

I’m probably the worst person to write about killing off characters since it’s not something I do often in my own writing, but I think my perspective can help you and maybe help my own writing as well. So let’s talk about the benefits of a good death in your narrative.

Killing a  character can start a story

This is a bit of a cheat, but I can’t resist using it. In the Princess Bride, we meet Inigo Montoya. (I know this isn’t a story about Inigo alone, but stick with me here.)

When he is a small child, Inigo’s father is killed by a mysterious man with six fingers on his right hand. Inigo swears vengeance and dedicates his life to learning the art of sword fighting. If the Princess Bride were just about Inigo, then this would be the start of the book/movie.

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A better example might be found in The Graveyard Book by Neil Gaiman. (Hope you don’t mind the reference @neil-gaiman.) In that story, a shadowy figure enters a house to kill everyone inside. His quest is successful, except for the youngest member of the family. This small child manages to crawl out of the house and finds his way to the cemetery where is adopted by the ghosts that live there. This is also the beginning of his quest for vengeance.

Killing your character can advance the story

Were you one of the people that were upset when Dumbledore died? I don’t get that. Dumbledore’s death made the story that much better. Until that moment in the series, Harry treated the head of Hogwarts like a crutch. Dumbledore had all the answers and explained every important plot point. (And stole Harry’s candy, but only that one time that we know of for sure.)

It was the death of Dumbledore that made Harry realize that he needed to strike out on his own and take an active approach to fighting Voldemort instead of just hiding out in “safe houses.” (Remember those Dementors? Feels quite safe doesn’t it?)

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Another good example is Luke Skywalker in A New Hope. If his aunt and uncle hadn’t been wiped out, in the search for R2D2 and C2PO, he might not have left his home planet with Obi Wan. Where would Star Wars be then?

Remind people that your story is similar to reality (even if it isn’t completely true)

Even in the most unusual of tales, we need to have a way to connect to the reality around us. Without some form of connection, your readers won’t be able to get into the story. 

Consider Alice in Wonderland and Through the Looking Glass by Lewis Carrol. (Keep in mind that they are very different stories and worlds.) Carrol manages to create bizarre worlds with a narrative flow that can be confusing to many readers. So why is this story embraced by so many readers, writers, directors, and producers?

It’s because there’s something in these books that people can connect to. We all know someone like the Red Queen, full of bluster and shouting. We’ve dealt with an overly educated egghead like Humpty Dumpty. Regardless of the bizarre natures of the characters, they are familiar to us.

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Oh yeah, death- so the point I’m trying to make is that death is a thing that happens and having a death in your story can bring your narrative back to reality, at least for a moment or two.

Change the character dynamics

Let’s say you have a group of characters you have been working with. There is a group dynamic that they share. What happens when one of those characters is gone from the group? That changes who the group is and how they relate to each other.

This happens frequently with television shows. Let’s consider Buffy the Vampire Slayer. How many romantic interests does Miss Summers have that die to create a change in the story. (and it’s not just Buffy that has this happen-not Tara!) When not overused, this can be an important way to address issues tht are often associated with dying. (brevity of life, mortality, unfairness, injustice, etc)

Give your story some extra meaning

Be careful with this one. You can’t just kill a character and then expect it to mean something. Death is a thing that happens and it is meaningful, but it doesn’t mean as much if you don’t know the person. Consider the difference between the following scenes.

Rebecca looked at her watch and then looked up the tunnel. She was going to be late. Where was her train? The familiar change in pressure signaled the arrival of another train. She heard a shout and turned towards the sound in time to see a tall lanky many dressed in an baggy suit step off the platform in fall in front of the train.

now this one

Kelly looked at her watch and looked up the tunnel. He was going to miss the train. She’d been waiting here for ten minutes now and her brother still hadn’t shown up. She heard a shout and turned to see what was happening. It was her brother running towards her. She ran to meet him, but the crowd was moving forward as the train approached. Brian was pushed forward by the crowd until he was at the edge of the platform. she watched as he lost his footing and fell in front of the train.

Now this was a bit of a cheat since we really don’t know much about either Kelly or Rebecca, but hopefully you get the point. The first death is a complete stranger to the character and so there is less meaning to it, but we can attach some meaning to the death of Kelly’s brother right away.

Add a sense of immediacy

Your character(s) have a goal to accomplish, or they had better have one. Even in the most dire of situations, you might get complacent and get distracted by non essential concerns. Sometimes the death of an important character in the story can motivate the remaining characters to get back on track.

Consider the graphic novel, Watchmen, (or the movie if you missed out on the GN) Almost all of the vigilantes have given up on their quest to fight crime after all the complications of the politics of vigilantism. It is the death of the Comedian that causes them to don their masks anew and search for the answers they have been ignoring. There is a sense of need that was missing from their lives before now.

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Show they mean business

So far we have only talked about deaths that impact the story line because they are a point against your main character, but what about your character trying to prove a point? We haven’t thought about that have we? There’s no reason your character has to be such a goody two shoes that they can’t use death to make a point of their own, right?

Let’s look to comic books again for this one. Consider some of comic’s most popular antiheroes (I’m thinking the likes of Wolverine, the Punisher, and Deadpool to name a few.) They take the initiative to make their point and intentions clear with the use of a death or two if they have to, and sometimes even if they don’t.

Wrap up

We could go on forever with this topic, but I think that’s enough for now. Hopefuly this will give you some motivation to go out there and kills some characters. As always, let us know if you have any other questions.

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1 month ago

Ways to un-stick a stuck story

Do an outline, whatever way works best. Get yourself out of the word soup and know where the story is headed.

Conflicts and obstacles. Hurt the protagonist, put things in their way, this keeps the story interesting. An easy journey makes the story boring and boring is hard to write.

Change the POV. Sometimes all it takes to untangle a knotted story is to look at it through different eyes, be it through the sidekick, the antagonist, a minor character, whatever.

Know the characters. You can’t write a story if the characters are strangers to you. Know their likes, dislikes, fears, and most importantly, their motivation. This makes the path clearer.

Fill in holes. Writing doesn’t have to be linear; you can always go back and fill in plotholes, and add content and context.

Have flashbacks, hallucinations, dream sequences or foreshadowing events. These stir the story up, deviations from the expected course add a feeling of urgency and uncertainty to the narrative.

Introduce a new mystery. If there’s something that just doesn’t add up, a big question mark, the story becomes more compelling. Beware: this can also cause you to sink further into the mire.

Take something from your protagonist. A weapon, asset, ally or loved one. Force him to operate without it, it can reinvigorate a stale story.

Twists and betrayal. Maybe someone isn’t who they say they are or the protagonist is betrayed by someone he thought he could trust. This can shake the story up and get it rolling again.

Secrets. If someone has a deep, dark secret that they’re forced to lie about, it’s a good way to stir up some fresh conflict. New lies to cover up the old ones, the secret being revealed, and all the resulting chaos.

Kill someone. Make a character death that is productive to the plot, but not “just because”. If done well, it affects all the characters, stirs up the story and gets it moving.

Ill-advised character actions. Tension is created when a character we love does something we hate. Identify the thing the readers don’t want to happen, then engineer it so it happens worse than they imagined.

Create cliff-hangers. Keep the readers’ attention by putting the characters into new problems and make them wait for you to write your way out of it. This challenge can really bring out your creativity.

Raise the stakes. Make the consequences of failure worse, make the journey harder. Suddenly the protagonist’s goal is more than he expected, or he has to make an important choice.

Make the hero active. You can’t always wait for external influences on the characters, sometimes you have to make the hero take actions himself. Not necessarily to be successful, but active and complicit in the narrative.

Different threat levels. Make the conflicts on a physical level (“I’m about to be killed by a demon”), an emotional level (“But that demon was my true love”) and a philosophical level (“If I’m forced to kill my true love before they kill me, how can love ever succeed in the face of evil?”).

Figure out an ending. If you know where the story is going to end, it helps get the ball rolling towards that end, even if it’s not the same ending that you actually end up writing.

What if? What if the hero kills the antagonist now, gets captured, or goes insane? When you write down different questions like these, the answer to how to continue the story will present itself.

Start fresh or skip ahead. Delete the last five thousand words and try again. It’s terrifying at first, but frees you up for a fresh start to find a proper path. Or you can skip the part that’s putting you on edge – forget about that fidgety crap, you can do it later – and write the next scene. Whatever was in-between will come with time.


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1 month ago

Some advice as a discovery writer is to outline.

I update my outline after every scene because I make everything up as I go and change everything, but I need to know where I'm going in order to know how to start a scene.

Only do the major plot beats if you really can't outline, but try it. Some benefits may include:

Strong pacing

Confidence in scenes

Knowing your subplots

Foreshadowing

Less editing

Less writer's block/easier to overcome

It can also take a bit of practice and finding what works best for you, writing doesn't have rules.


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1 month ago

What to give a fuck about,while writing your first draft!

I`ve posted a list about things you don´t need to give a fuck about while writing your first draft. Here are things you NEED TO CARE about! (in my opinion)

Your Authentic Voice: Don't let the fear of judgment or comparison stifle your unique voice. I know it´s hard,but try to write from your heart, and don't worry about perfection in the first draft. Let your authenticity shine through your words.

Your Story, Your Way: It's your narrative, your world, and your characters. Don't let external expectations or trends dictate how your story should unfold. Write the story you want to tell.

Progress Over Perfection: Your first draft is not the final product; it's the raw material for your masterpiece. Give a fuck about making progress, not achieving perfection. Embrace imperfections and understand that editing comes later.

Consistency and Routine: Discipline matters. Make a commitment to your writing routine and stick to it.

Feedback and Growth: While it's essential to protect your creative space during the first draft, be open to constructive feedback later on. Giving a f*ck about growth means you're willing to learn from others and improve your work.

Self-Compassion: Mistakes, writer's block, and self-doubt are all part of the process. Give a f*ck about being kind to yourself. Don't beat yourself up if the words don't flow perfectly every time. Keep pushing forward and remember that writing is a journey.

Remember, the first draft is your canvas, your playground. Don't bog yourself down with unnecessary worries.

What To Give A Fuck About,while Writing Your First Draft!

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1 month ago

Learn the Differences Between Novelettes, Novellas, and Novels

Since I am currently in the process of writing a story, but I'm not sure what I want it to be... I'd figure I'd go ahead and share the differences!

So let's get to it!

Writing the first draft of a novel can be a daunting, arduous task. That’s why the novelette format can be so appealing. In many ways, a novelette is like a short novel. It allows writers to hone their craft by learning how to tell stories under a strict word count restriction.

What Is a Novelette?

The definition of “novelette” is any short, fictional work of prose narrative. Novelettes have a lower number of words than a novel or novella, but a higher word count than other forms of prose fiction like short stories or microfiction. Despite lacking the page count of a full-length novel, novelettes generally tell a complete story. Some people refer to novelettes as “long short stories” or “short novellas.”

How Long Is a Novelette?

Any work of fiction with a word count between 7,500 and 19,000 is generally considered a novelette. A novelette is longer than a short story, which usually has a word range of between 1,000 and 7,500 words, and flash fiction, which is usually under 1,000 words. Any piece of creative writing that is longer than a novelette but shorter than a novel is considered a novella.

Three Differences Between Novelettes and Novellas

A novella is a standalone piece of fiction that is shorter than a full-length novel but longer than a short story or novelette. Novellas incorporate many narrative and structural elements of novel-length stories—but like novelettes, they often focus on single points of view, focusing on a single central conflict, and rely on fast pacing. Here are the differences between novelettes and novellas:

Word count: The primary difference between a novelette and a novella, then, is word count (novelettes are shorter than novellas).

Subject matter: Traditionally, novelettes tended to focus on whimsical, sentimental themes. The modern-day novelette, though, is more like the novella in that it can encompass different genres like sci-fi, drama, or historical short fiction.

Complexity: In terms of storytelling ambition, novelettes tend to split the difference between novellas and shorter forms like short stories. Novelettes tend to have a greater focus on character development, worldbuilding, and plotting than short stories. However, the stories are generally more concise and focused than a novella-length work, as the word count is often too restrictive to tell a long story.

Three Differences Between Novellas and Novels

The most obvious difference between novels and novellas is page length and number of words. However, beyond this superficial difference, many structural and thematic hallmarks of novellas make them their own standalone genre of writing. Some of these include:

 A single central conflict: Most novellas explore a single, compelling central conflict. Because of their shorter length, novellas have less time to explore subplots and tend to focus on the main plot. Novellas generally have one main character and a handful of secondary characters. Because of length constraints, most of the character development will be focused on the protagonist.

 Fast pacing: Novellas usually move at a quick pace. Whereas novels can spend time diverging from the central conflict to delve into backstory and explore multiple points of view, novellas generally offer a quick compelling story with a singular point of view.

Unity of time and place: When writing novellas, writers should root the action in continuous time within a limited space, ideally one location.

Benefits of Writing a Novelette

For short story writers or people who generally write shorter works, novelettes can be an opportunity to tell a longer-form, standalone story. For writers who are used to writing, say, full-length science fiction or fantasy novels, the word count restriction of a novelette offers a chance to tell a good story with a simple cast of characters and few subplots.

Seven Examples of Novelettes

Novelette writers know how to tell a complete story in a relatively short amount of time. Here are some famous examples of novelettes, many of which were originally published in literary magazines:

The Fall of the House of Usher by Edgar Allan Poe (1839)

The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde by Robert Louis Stevenson (1886)

The Metamorphosis by Franz Kafka (1915)

The Call Of Cthulhu by H. P. Lovecraft (1928)

The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry (1943)

Bloodchild by Octavia E. Butler (1995)

Hell Is the Absence of God by Ted Chiang (2001)

I hope this helps! Thank you for still being my followers and patiently waiting for a post!


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1 month ago

I wanted to write today… but my brain said, “Nope.” Not sure if it’s a motivation issue or just good old-fashioned writer’s block, but either way—progress needed to happen.

So, I cheated (but like, in a totally productive way). I followed my plot outline and wrote just the dialogue. No fancy descriptions, no deep internal monologues—just vibes and conversation. And you know what? It worked.

I once said that the only job of the first draft is to exist. A skeletal scene with dialogue and the barest hint of description? Totally fine. That’s what the second draft is for. Future Me can deal with the details—Current Me just needs to keep the story moving.


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1 month ago

Basic Writing Terms: Types of Characters

There are a lot of different words to describe the roles that characters play within the narrative, some characters can occupy multiple roles at once, but these terms are not always synonymous. Confusion can occur when one assumes that one term encompasses another with which it is often paired.

These are some terms and a brief overview of how they will be used on this blog.

Protagonist: The leading character. Not necessarily of any particular moral persuasion, can be a goodie, a baddie, or an in-betweenie, depending on the story being told. Can be a group of people either working together, or who inhabit the same narrative.

Antagonist: A person or the person who opposes the protagonist, there can be multiple antagonists for any given protagonist. Does not indicate any particular moral code except that they are in conflict with the protagonist.

Main Character: The leading character. Often in an ensemble cast there is one character who is more central to the story. (Most generic term)

Focalising Character: Characters through which we see the story, their perceptions and knowledge will colour the narrative and influence the reader’s opinions. A story can have one or many focalising characters, but only one can be used at a time (a ‘switching POV’ is a shift from one focalising character to another).

Hero/ heroine: Often a protagonist. Is a character who is explicitly siding with the moral good.

Anti-hero: Often a protagonist. Is a character who is the centre of a heroic narrative while not having ‘conventional’ heroic traits.

Villain: Often an antagonist. Is a character who is explicitly siding with the moral evil.

Anti-villain: Often an antagonist. Is a character who may be explicitly siding with moral evil, but likely has non-villainous motivations or attributes.

Foil: A particular type of antagonist or villain who’s personal qualities compliment or contrast in such a way that they illuminate thematic elements of the protagonist or hero’s character.

Secondary Character: A character who is not in the central protagonist/ focalising character role. Can have significant role/ impact on the narrative, but is not the focus of the narrative.

Minor Character: A smaller role than the secondary characters, may appear only for a few lines, attention to detail on minor characters can help make world building feel more ‘real’.

Narrator: The character who is ‘voicing’ the story. May or may not be a character that is personally a part of the story. (Not all stories have explicit narrators, but all stories have narrative voice!)


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2 weeks ago

Some advice as a discovery writer is to outline.

I update my outline after every scene because I make everything up as I go and change everything, but I need to know where I'm going in order to know how to start a scene.

Only do the major plot beats if you really can't outline, but try it. Some benefits may include:

Strong pacing

Confidence in scenes

Knowing your subplots

Foreshadowing

Less editing

Less writer's block/easier to overcome

It can also take a bit of practice and finding what works best for you, writing doesn't have rules.


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1 month ago

Let writing empower you

Writing is a form of empowerment. The act of creating a world in which you have ultimate control can be an incredibly cathartic and joyful experience.

If you get overwhelmed or blocked, just remember that you have the power. You get to mould the world and its characters into whatever shape brings you the greatest satisfaction.


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1 month ago

If you're a writer you're supposed to write a lot of bullshit. It's part of the gig. You have to write a lot of absolute garbage in order to get to the good bits. Every once in a while you'll be like "Oh, I wish I hadn't wasted all that time writing bullshit," but that's dumb. That's exactly the same as an Olympic runner being like "Oh, I wish I hadn't wasted all that time running all those practice laps"


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